Sunday, January 11, 2015

blog review

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                I read Megan’s blog and it was good. I think this because she used many intriguing quotes that really convince the reader of her point. For example she uses quotes that are surprising and will really brainwash the reader into thinking she is right. For example “there are nights where I go to bed and I’m starving” this quote is very convincing because nobody wants to be starving. Also, the word starving  makes it seem like the person who said that is going to die or something, making it seem more extreme.
                Megan also uses her own opinion at the end which makes it seem more convincing. This is so because it shows that this is a real person’s opinion. This can really effect the reader’s thinking because it shows a real person just like you. Also , Megan really sounded professional when she stated her opinion. This makes the reader want to trust her more because she sounds smart.

                I think I learned from this that being professional when stating your opinion is important. Before, I didn’t really realize how important it was to sound important as long as you just have the right facts. But, I learned that it is most important that you sound like you know what you’re talking about, because that in itself could convince somebody our point.

2 comments:

  1. Where is the link to Megan's blog post?

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  2. These are really good points that you are making about her blog post, from reading your opinion and review on her blog I can learn that using sophisticated language, and stating your opinion are both very important things in writing an argument essay. These are skills that I can use while writing essays too.

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